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雅思作文要写对有这三大标准:统一性、完整性和连贯性,怎么样写才把这个标准都用上呢,例句如下:
一、统一性:
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
一个段落内的各个句子必须属于一个主题思想,任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit,但段中有两个irrelevant sentences,一个是I bought two new suitcases last week,另一个是My mother was a premature baby。
二、完整性:
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can’t swim
and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming
“Help”?
一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现,假如只有主题句而没有推展句来进一步交待和充实,就不能构成一个完整的段落。相同的,虽然有推展句,但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待,会给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。
三、连贯性:
连贯性包括形连和意连两个方面,前者指的是使用转换词语,后者指的是内在的逻辑性。这两者通常是不可分割的。
A.按时间先后排列(chronological arrangement)
B.按位置远近排列(spatial arrangement)
C.按逻辑关系排列(logical arrangement)
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